Koj tuaj yeem sau nkauj txog txhua yam, tab sis qhov ntawd qee zaum ua rau nws nyuaj rau pib dua lwm yam. Qee leej neeg siv cov kev paub dhau los ntawm lawv tus kheej lub neej los ua kev tshoov siab, thiab lwm tus sau tej yam uas lawv tau nyeem txog. Tsis muaj teeb meem dab tsi koj xaiv sau rau, txhua tus tuaj yeem sau lawv tus kheej cov nkauj nrog kev xyaum me ntsis.
Cov kauj ruam
Txoj Kev 1 ntawm 3: Tuaj Nrog Lub Tswv Yim
Kauj Ruam 1. Sau dawb txog txhua yam uas koj xav tau
Cov nkauj yog hais txog txhua yam - kev sib hlub, poob khau, kev nom kev tswv, kev nyuaj siab, kev zoo siab, tsev kawm ntawv, thiab lwm yam - yog li tsis txhob txhawj txog kev sau qhov "raug" thiab tsuas yog pib sau. Yog tias koj tsis xav kom sib dhos cov nkauj tam sim no, qhov ntawd zoo tag nrho. Tam sim no, koj tsuas yog sau cov tswv yim thiab cov ntaub ntawv los ua haujlwm nrog tom qab. Thaum xav txog cov tswv yim, sim ua:
- Hais tawm los ntawm lub plawv- yam uas koj xav tiag tiag txog feem ntau yog qhov yooj yim tshaj plaws los sau cov nkauj rau.
- Tsis txhob txiav txim lossis muab pov tseg koj txoj haujlwm tsis tau - qhov no yog theem sau, koj yuav ua tiav raws li koj tau sau tseg.
Kauj Ruam 2. Nrhiav cov kab koj nyiam thiab tsim cov lus sib dhos ntawm lawv
Hais tias koj tab tom sau txog tsev kawm ntawv, thiab koj muaj kab ntawv, "Thawb xaum rau tus kws qhia ntawv tsis ntse dua kuv." Tsis txhob sim sau tag nrho zaj nkauj ib zaug, siv kab ntawv no los pib tsim. Txhua yam koj xav tau yog ib txoj kab zoo kom tau lub pob.
- Koj yuav ua dab tsi ntau dua li tsev kawm ntawv ("Kuv yuav theej de txiv apples thiab viav vias los ntawm cov ntoo")?
- Koj paub li cas tus kws qhia ntawv tsis ntse tshaj koj ("Kuv daim ntawv ntawm quantum physics tsuas tau txais kuv tus C")?
- Cov nkauj feem ntau tsuas yog 4-6 kab ntev, yog li qhov no twb yog ib nrab ntawm nqe lus!
Kauj Ruam 3. Tsim tus nqes yooj yim lossis hu nkauj
Nqe lauj yog ib feem ntawm zaj nkauj. Nws yuav tsum yooj yim thiab lom zem, thiab feem ntau qhia rau tib neeg tias zaj nkauj hais txog dab tsi. Lub tswv yim zoo rau kev sib tham yog tsuas yog sau ob zaj nkauj sib dhos zoo thiab tom qab ntawd rov ua dua, pab lawv ua rau cov neeg mloog mloog:
- Choruses yuav tsum yooj yim kom lawv nco tau yooj yim.
- Hooks tsis tas yuav hais lus sib dhos, raws li pom hauv nto npe Rolling Stones nuv: "Koj tsis tuaj yeem tau txais yam koj xav tau / Tab sis yog tias koj sim qee zaum koj yuav pom koj qhov koj xav tau."
Kauj Ruam 4. Txiav tawm ib lo lus ntau dhau, kab, thiab cov tswv yim kom txog thaum tsuas yog cov khoom zoo tshaj plaws nyob
Cov nkauj yog luv thiab mus rau qhov, thiab cov nkauj zoo tshaj plaws tsis nkim ib lub suab lus. Thaum kho cov nkauj, xav txog:
- Cov lus ua. Tsis txhob cia siab rau "yog," "kev hlub," thiab lwm yam lus uas txhua tus neeg tau hnov. Sim siv qhov tshwj xeeb, cov lus tseeb los qhia zaj nkauj txoj kev xav.
- Txiav. Koj tuaj yeem rov sau kab ntawv li cas kom nws luv dua thiab ntau ntxiv rau lub ntsiab lus?
- Cov ntsiab lus tsis meej nyob qhov twg? Tsis txhob hais tias, "peb tau hauv tsheb," hais hom tsheb. Tsis txhob tham txog kev mus noj hmo, hais tias hom zaub mov twg koj tau noj.
Kauj Ruam 5. Tshawb xyuas ntau hom lus sib dhos
Muaj ntau txoj hauv kev los sau ib zaj nkauj, tab sis yuav luag tag nrho lawv cov nkauj sib dhos. Qhov kev xyaum zoo tshaj plaws rau cov pib tshiab yog nkag siab txog hom nkauj sib dhos lawv muaj thiab tsuas yog ua haujlwm yooj yim, 2-4 kab ntu ntawm kab lus sib dhos. Thaum koj rub cov no ua ke, ib zaj nkauj yuav maj mam yug los:
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Yooj Yim Rhyme:
Qhov no tsuas yog sib dhos cov suab lus kawg ntawm ob kab, zoo li Kuv nyuam qhuav pom a ntsej muag / Kuv tsis tuaj yeem hnov qab lub sijhawm lossis qhov chaw."
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Kev sib dhos Slant:
Qhov no yog thaum cov lus tsis siv txuj ci sib dhos, tab sis lawv tau hu ib txoj hauv kev uas ua rau lawv tshwm rau cov lus sib dhos. Nws yog qhov tsis txaus ntseeg nyob rau txhua qhov ntawm kev sau nkauj. Piv txwv xws li "Qhov ntswg" thiab "mus," lossis "txiv kab ntxwv" thiab "porridge."
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Multi-syllabic lus sib dhos:
Qhov no siv ntau lo lus lossis kab lus sib dhos, txhua qhov sib dhos. Txheeb xyuas Big Daddy Kane ntawm "Ib Hnub," qhov chaw uas nws raps "Tsis tas yuav xav tsis thoob leej twg cov txiv neej/ Nyob zoo saib ib txwm yog tus ex pawgiav hom.
Kauj Ruam 6. Xav txog koj zaj nkauj zoo li zaj dab neeg me me
Txawm tias nkauj hais txog kev xav lossis kev xav ntawm nom tswv tuaj yeem kawm los ntawm kev qhia dab neeg. Koj xav tau ib qho arc, lossis qee qhov kev hloov lossis kev nce qib. Piv txwv li, xav txog pes tsawg zaj nkauj hlub pib nrog kev poob siab lossis qis tus neeg hu nkauj ua ntej tus ntxhais/txiv leej tub pom. Koj tau txais kev taug kev los ntawm kev sib hlub, uas ua rau cov ntsiab lus ntxim nyiam.
Yog tias koj tab tom sau ib zaj nkauj, tsuas yog xav txog txhua nqe lus zoo li ua yeeb yam hauv zaj yeeb yaj kiab luv luv. Txij li cov nkauj feem ntau muaj peb nqe, qhov no txhais tau tias yog pib, nruab nrab, thiab qhov kawg
Kauj Ruam 7. Ua raws ib lub tswv yim lossis ntsiab lus ntawm ib zaj nkauj
Txawm tias Bob Dylan, yog ib tus kws sau nkauj uas nyuaj tshaj thiab nyuaj tshaj plaws ntawm txhua lub sijhawm, paub tias zaj nkauj zoo yuav tsum tau muab tso rau hauv ib lub tswv yim zoo. Saib yooj yim ntawm Dylan phau ntawv teev npe, tus kws sau nkauj pom tias cov nkauj zoo tshaj tshawb txog ib lub tswv yim tob, tsis yog ib lub tswv yim luv luv:
- "Blowin 'in the Wind," uas tshuaj xyuas ntau qhov teeb meem, ua rau nws tus kheej nrog cov lus nug yooj yim thaum pib ntawm txhua nqe - Ntev npaum li cas qhov kev tsis ncaj ncees yuav dhau mus ua ntej nws yuav hloov?
- "Tombstone Blues," yog ib qho ntawm Dylan cov nkauj nthuav thiab nthuav tawm, yog hais txog kev txhawj xeeb txog qhov tau sau thiab nco txog ntawm peb lub qhov ntxa tom qab peb tuag.
Kauj Ruam 8. Khaws ib phau ntawv sau sau cov kab lus ntxim nyiam, txawm tias lawv tsis sau nkauj
Lub sijhawm dhau los, txawm li cas los xij, cov khoom me me no yuav muab cov ntawv sib dhos rau tag nrho cov nkauj, sib xyaw thiab sib txuam kom pab pib ua suab paj nruag. Khaws ib phau ntawv lossis xov tooj sau rau ntawm koj yog txoj hauv kev zoo tshaj los khaws cov tswv yim thaum twg los txog.
Tus sau nkauj zoo nkauj Paul Simon hais tias txhua yam ntawm nws cov nkauj tau tsim los ntawm cov ntawv xoob no. Raws li nws pom qee qhov sib phim, nws maj mam tsim cov nkauj rau ib zaj nkauj
Txoj Kev 2 ntawm 3: Sau Ntawv Nkauj Tag Nrho
Kauj Ruam 1. Siv lub npe ntawm zaj nkauj los teeb lub siab, lub ntsiab lus, lossis lub tswv yim tseem ceeb tshaj plaws
Lub npe ntawm zaj nkauj tuaj yeem yog hu nkauj, lossis nws tuaj yeem yog lwm lo lus/kab lus koj xav tias suav txhua yam. Lub npe yog cov neeg mloog thawj qhov kev xav hais tias zaj nkauj hais txog lossis txhais li cas, yog li siv koj lub sijhawm xav txog nws.
Uas tau hais tias, tsis txhob ua lub npe nyuaj yog tias koj tsis tas yuav. Cov nkauj feem ntau siv cov kab hu nkauj rau qhov laj thawj - cov hu nkauj twb tau hais txog lub ntsiab lus tseem ceeb ntawm zaj nkauj
Kauj Ruam 2. Npaj koj cov kab rau hauv cov phiaj xwm sib dhos
Ib txoj hauv kev zoo los xav txog qhov no yog kab lus sib dhos, qhov twg txhua tsab ntawv ua piv txwv txog kev sib dhos. Yog li, hauv ABAB cov lus sib dhos, thawj kab (A) sib dhos nrog peb (A) thiab kab thib ob (B) sib dhos nrog plaub (B). Kuj tseem muaj AABB, qhov twg kab tsuas sib dhos rov qab. Muaj ntau pua txoj hauv kev los teeb tsa koj cov lus sib dhos, yog li pib ua si nrog koj cov kab kom txog thaum koj nyiam lub suab.
- ABAB, lossis "sib dhos sib dhos" kuj yog ib qho, thiab tau sau yooj yim los ntawm kev faib ob txoj kab ntev mus rau plaub qhov.
- Cov kws tshaj lij tiag tiag yuav sim ua suab paj nruag 4-6 kab ua ke. Qhov no tuaj yeem yog AAAA BBBB cov lus sib dhos, lossis txawm tias AAAA AAAA yog tias koj xav tias nyuaj ntxiv.
- Qee tus kws sau ntawv yuav sim nthuav tawm cov lus sib dhos ntawm ntau nqe lus. Zoo li AAAB CCCB cov phiaj xwm. Piv txwv li, qhib rau "Tombstone Blues."
Kauj Ruam 3. Paub cov nkauj hauv zaj nkauj
Muaj, feem ntau, peb ntu tseem ceeb ntawm zaj nkauj, tsis suav nrog intro lossis outro (uas tuaj yeem, tau kawg, muaj cov ntsiab lus). Peb ntu no tau sib xyaw thiab sib phim los ua zaj nkauj kawg:
- Choruses/Hooks yog ntu ntu ntawm zaj nkauj, thiab thaj chaw zoo nkauj uas koj vam tias txhua tus yuav nco qab zaj nkauj los ntawm. Lawv feem ntau luv luv, thiab rov zoo ib yam.
- Nqe feem ntau yog ntu ntev tshaj plaws, feem ntau tshwj xeeb, qhov uas koj nthuav dav ntawm cov tswv yim ntawm zaj nkauj thiab ua rau koj lub ntsiab lus, qhia koj zaj dab neeg, thiab lwm yam.
- Txuas hniav, tseem hu ua "Middle 8s," yog ntu uas muaj cov twj sib txawv. Lawv feem ntau hloov pauv ntawm kev hu nkauj lossis nqe lus, lossis muab ib ntu ntawm qhov sib txawv ntawm kev ntxhib los mos thiab suab. Qhov no tuaj yeem yog ib qho cuab yeej nkaus xwb, lossis txiav txim siab qhov kev hloov pauv lossis lub ntsiab lus ntawm cov lus.
Kauj Ruam 4. Hais kom koj nqe, hu nkauj, thiab txhua tus choj
Thaum koj tau txais tsawg kawg ib zaj nkauj thiab ob peb nqe lus sau koj tuaj yeem pib xav txog tias lawv hloov pauv li cas. Koj tseem tuaj yeem sau tus choj los sib xyaw ua ke. Cov qauv nkauj feem ntau yog intro / nqe lus / chorus / verse / chorus / choj / chorus / outro, tab sis tsis muaj ib yam yuav yuav koj rau tus qauv no.
- Lwm qhov kev dag yog kom siv ntau tus choj kom tau txais los ntawm txhua nqe rau txhua zaj nkauj- qee yam zoo li nqe / choj / hu nkauj / nqe / choj / hu nkauj / thiab lwm yam.
- Cov choj kuj tseem tuaj yeem ua cov khoom tawg zoo li guitar solo.
Kauj Ruam 5. Hum, xuav, strum, lossis ua si ib puag ncig ntawm lub piano kom pom cov nkauj hu nkauj
Sau koj tus kheej cov ntawv tsuas yog ib nrab ntawm kev sib ntaus sib tua - koj yuav tsum paub hu nkauj li cas, ib yam. Txawm hais tias koj yog rapper, koj tseem yuav tsum xav txog "ntws," lossis nrawm thiab nrawm ntawm koj cov lus. Txoj hauv kev zoo tshaj plaws los ua qhov no yog kev sim, feem ntau yog siv cov cuab yeej ntawm qee yam, tab sis koj tuaj yeem txawm xuav lossis quab yuam kom txog thaum qee yam suab zoo ib yam.
Paul McCartney ntawm The Beatles nto moo pom lub suab nkauj rau "Nag hmo" los ntawm kev rov hais cov lus "Scrambled Eggs" kom txog thaum nws pom cov ntawv. Cov ntawv tau muab tso rau tom qab
Txoj Kev 3 ntawm 3: Txhim Kho Ua Tus Sau Nkauj
Kauj Ruam 1. Ua si nrog cov lus sib dhos sab hauv los muab koj cov nkauj ntau dua melodic, hu nkauj-nkauj zoo
Kev sib dhos sab hauv yog thaum koj muaj cov lus sib dhos me me zais hauv nruab nrab ntawm kab. Koj tseem muaj koj li kab lus xaus ib txwm hais lus, tsuas yog muaj qhov tsw ntxiv me ntsis hauv nruab nrab. Rau ib qho piv txwv, txheeb xyuas qhov MF Doom kab tawm ntawm "Rhinestone Cowboy:" "Ua tau zoo chrome hlau / pom nws ntawm cov zom nws yog ib tug rhine pob zeb tus cowboy."
- Ib txoj hauv kev zoo los pib nrog kev sib dhos sab hauv yog txiav koj cov kab ib nrab, kho cov lus sib dhos zoo ib yam li 4 kab luv tsis siv ob qhov ntev.
- Kev sib dhos sab hauv tsis tas yuav ua ntu zus, zoo li lus sib dhos ib txwm muaj. Txawm tias ib lossis ob zaj nkauj tuaj yeem muaj txiaj ntsig zoo.
- Koj tuaj yeem muaj cov lus sib dhos sab hauv tib kab, zoo li lwm txoj kab MF Doom, "nws yuav tsis ua txhawb xoob Philly nrog bar code."
Kauj Ruam 2. Rhyme ntau kab ua ke rau melodic, nruj ntu
Txheeb xyuas Red Hot Chili Pepper's "Californiaication," uas sib dhos feem ntau ntawm kab nrog lub npe lo lus, "Californication." Vim tias muaj ntau txoj kab sib dhos nrog qhov no, tus hu nkauj Anthony Kiedis tsis xav tau los sib dhos kab thib 1 thiab thib 3 ntawm txhua nqe lus nrog txhua yam - muab nws lub suab lus "pub dawb" hauv txhua nqe.
Lwm lub tswv yim yog los sib dhos kab kawg ntawm txhua nqe lus nrog kab kawg ntawm txhua lwm nqe lus. Txheeb xyuas "Yooj Yim Twist Ntawm Txoj hmoo."
Kauj Ruam 3. Siv cov cuab yeej poetic los ntxiv suab paj nruag yam tsis muaj lus sib dhos
Cov ntawv sau yog paj huam muab tso rau nkauj, thiab muaj ntau yam los kawm los ntawm daim duab uas muaj txhiab xyoo. Cov tswv yim hauv qab no tuaj yeem swb rau hauv kab kom tso tus kws tshaj lij, txaus siab rau sheen ntawm koj cov nkauj:
- Assonance yog thaum koj siv tib lub suab vowel ntau zaus, xws li "kua zoo" lossis "pom tseeb tias khib."
- Alliteration zoo ib yam li qhov sib txawv, tab sis nrog cov ntawv sib txuas. Piv txwv suav nrog "txoj kab nqes hav" thiab "ntxuav cov poj niam polo dej."
Kauj Ruam 4. Sau ob peb lo lus piv txwv thiab ua piv txwv
Tsis yog txhua zaj nkauj yuav tsum muaj lub ntsiab lus tob, thiab ntau yam yuav tsum tsis txhob. Txawm tias tsis zoo, qee cov nkauj sim nyuaj dhau los txhawm rau nkag siab lub ntsiab lus thiab tsuas yog xaus rau qhov tsis meej pem lossis yuam kev. Qhov ntawd tau hais tias, cov lus piv txwv zoo tuaj yeem hloov ib zaj nkauj los ntawm lub suab nkauj kom dhau mus rau zaj nkauj muaj zog, tus kheej, thiab cuam tshuam:
- Piv txwv yog thaum ib yam raug cuam tshuam los sawv rau lwm qhov, zoo li zaj nkauj "Firework" los ntawm Katy Perry. Nws tsis txhais hais tias "koj yog foob pob hluav taws," nws txhais tau tias koj muaj lub neej sab hauv zoo nkauj tos kom tawg mus rau hauv lub ntiaj teb.
- Simile yog qhov ua piv txwv ncaj qha siv lo lus "nyiam" lossis "as." Piv txwv li "Nws zoo li lub paj," piv txwv tias nws zoo nkauj heev, tab sis tej zaum yuav pos pos txaus ntshai.
- Synecdoche yog thaum ib feem me me sawv cev rau tag nrho loj dua. Piv txwv li, "tus cwj mem muaj zog dua ntaj" txhais tau tias "tswv yim muaj zog dua li kev ua phem," tsis yog cwjmem yeej ntaus ntaj.
Kauj Ruam 5. Sim ua kom sib dhos tsis zoo lossis tsim cov lus
Cov kws sau nkauj zoo tshaj plaws paub tias cov neeg tuaj saib tau xav txog ntau yam nkauj sib dhos hauv cov nkauj nrov - "peb/nws/nws/kuv," "hlub/nquab," "mus/yog li/qis/tshuab." - thiab lawv poob lawv lub zog los ua rau peb xav tsis thoob. Cov kws sau nkauj uas sawv ntawm qhov kev sim ntawm lub sijhawm txuas ntxiv ua rau peb xav tsis thoob nrog cov lus sib dhos ntev dua thiab nyuaj dua.
Los ntawm "Tombstone Blues:" "Kuv lub tswv yim yog kom tsis txhob cia cov tub hluas nyob hauv" // "Koj yuav tsis tuag, nws tsis yog tshuaj lom." Muaj tsawg leej lwm tus neeg tau sib dhos "cov tub hluas hauv" nrog "tshuaj lom."
Kauj Ruam 6. Sau dua, rov sau dua, rov sau dua
Cov kws sau nkauj zoo tshaj hauv ntiaj teb paub tias ib zaj nkauj tsis tshua zoo tawm los zoo ib yam. Paul Simon txawm hais tias nws yuav siv 50 daim ntawv, tag nrho nrog cov ntawv sau sau, kom nws ua tiav ib zaj nkauj xwb. Ib tus kws sau nkauj zoo paub tias lawv yuav tsum ua haujlwm cov nkauj ntev tom qab thawj zaug xav txog lub tswv yim.
- Khaws cov ntawv qub ntawm koj cov ntawv sau, txoj kev ntawd koj tuaj yeem rov qab mus rau qhov qub yog tias koj xav sim qee yam tshiab thiab nws tsis zoo.
- Siv cov yeeb yaj kiab thiab cov yeeb yam los sim tawm nkauj tshiab hauv kab lus. Lawv xav tias zoo nyob qhov twg thiab nws txawv txav los hu nkauj qhov twg? Cov neeg seem zoo li cas?
Kauj Ruam 7. Tshaj tawm koj cov lus hauv cov xwm txheej tiag, khoom, thiab yam
Ib zaj nkauj hnyav ntawm lub tswv yim tsis yog qhov phem, tab sis koj xav tau cov duab meej los pab koj cov neeg saib pom lub tswv yim. Tig rov qab mus rau "Blowin 'in the Wind," nco ntsoov tias Dylan couches txhua qhov kev txom nyem hauv zej tsoom hauv qhov duab tiag - lub roob tawg, tus txiv neej taug kev, tus nquab kho siab, thiab lwm yam - yog li zaj nkauj tso cov duab nyob hauv cov neeg mloog lub taub hau.
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